Monday, 7 November 2011

WAR

This post portrays the image of the world after a massive war.



When the sun's departure smears the blue sky with red.When the emanation of smoke and gunpowder overcomes what was once the fragrance of nature at its full bloom. When the roar of bombs echo, silencing the lilting tunes of the songbirds. When the green meadows, where the rover once rested, corrode by the inferno's hand. When the proud, erect trees are made to stoop; their heads once high now bowing in mercy. When the fields, where once children played, are opened by craters. When the new paints of white on the villas are stripped of color, superseded by rotting paleness. When the ancient edifices are battered. When the active streets, once abundant with population, are desolated. When ecstacy is killed by foreboding. When love is lost and animosity arouses. When the world, a child one knew, is now merely a round deceased carcass.
'Tis WAR to blame.
Comments please...!

6 comments:

  1. When the human misery crosses all boundaries and becomes inexplicable. AGH! Such is the pain. :(
    Very well written. I could imagine and almost feel this post.

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  2. "When the human misery crosses all boundaries and becomes inexplicable"...I should have included this too. Fits very well.
    Thanks alot crystal. I didn't know my writing was that good enough.

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  3. you are very talented. you see, i've read until this post. i', impressed.keep it up :)

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  4. Inspector sahb - I'm touched really. Thankyou for these lovely comments. I hope I impress you in the future.

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